Screenshot Thread: Ready and Deady!

[Hymmitjah]

Not a bad Forest, I just have an ingrained hatred of the RPGmaker canopy tiles because they completely defy nature.

I do agree that those autotiles aren't the best-looking for forests. One day, maybe, I'll try to make something more natural with pixel art (unless I find a better autotile) and put it as panorama(for base ground and trunks) and overlay(dark leaves area).

BTW, nice artwork^^ the woman's arm might be to high, though (unless she's scratching her boob? twice?=/).

 

[Bizarre Monkey]

I do agree that those autotiles aren't the best-looking for forests. One day, maybe, I'll try to make something more natural with pixel art (unless I find a better autotile) and put it as panorama(for base ground and trunks) and overlay(dark leaves area).

There's always some neat forest tiles around somewhere. :D

@reisen: Able to use your busts at full size, finally!

@anyone else: Sorry, the lack of gameplay in that video was appalling, I have to get some go forwards and okays from some things and have a competent collision script before I can really get into the meaty side of things.

It's unlikely that scene will be in the final product, as it's essentially filler.

BTW, nice artwork^^ the woman's arm might be to high, though (unless she's scratching her boob? twice?=/).

Ahahaha, she is a succubus but really she's all just presenting, being all, look this could be yours but you're gonna have to abandon your morals and pledge yourself to SIN to geddit? Want some?

If she asked me? I'd say yes!

And not just because she's my waifu or anything! D:

Though I'm already a filthy little sinner, so it'd be easy to give myself for the boob scratchin. :3

Okay sorry, I'll stop!

It's funny how everyone notices the odd position of the right arm when the left arm is literally touching her crotch.

Truthfully, I didn't bother adjusting the arms because my portrait artist's work is gonna completely replace this anyway.

Here's a gallery with all nine expressions.
http://imgur.com/a/lZndH

 

[Hymmitjah]

There's always some neat forest tiles around somewhere.

Yea, I know. Still, I like the "treetops not showing" aspect of the default autotiles, so until I find what I want (or make my own) you'll have to suck your hatred for now ;).

when the left arm is literally touching her crotch.

Well, the message box kinda hid the crotch touching, so I didn't notice 'til you mentioned it haha^^

It's great you found an artist to help you with your portraits. I'm a character designer myself (comic book artist in fact), so I also take requests once in a while :)

 

[Bizarre Monkey]

Yea, I know. Still, I like the "treetops not showing" aspect of the default autotiles, so until I find what I want (or make my own) you'll have to suck your hatred for now ;).

In that video there's a pretty nifty little tileset, huhuhu~

Well, the message box kinda hid the crotch touching, so I didn't notice 'til you mentioned it haha^^

Wups! Silly me. Now everybody knows I'm a pervert. D:

It's great you found an artist to help you with your portraits. I'm a character designer myself (comic book artist in fact), so I also take requests once in a while :)

I've got 4 capable, but one is super eager and does work at a pace that isn't slow, actually the busts in that video I linked are totally hers.
http://imgur.com/a/MADEq
http://imgur.com/a/nyF9C

And Esperia's 8 are coming along nicely.

 

[Hymmitjah]

In that video there's a pretty nifty little tileset, huhuhu~

treetops not showing

I already have those kind of trees. Like I said, they're not what I'm looking for.

Depending on what is asked and which drawing style I have to use, I can work quite fast, especially for character portraits.

 

[Bizarre Monkey]

Fair enough. The CCC doesn't need another portrait artist right now. But I'm sure you'll find work somewhere!

I recently just started having fun developing 314th Clash again. So we're saved from obnoxiously large 960x720 px images this post, heh.

New look for Origin.

And Origin's not-so fluffy appearance. His face is very loosely based on some of the motifs in Undertale, particularly the DT Extraction Machine or Gasterblaster used by Sans.

If you look closely you can see '1's and '0's behind the skull, symbolizing Origin's role and further intensifying the existential fear of what the universe may become without it's main program.

Though it's been said by Member XII the goal is not to kill him, as that would be "inconsiderately stupid", instead the XVI intend to trap him along with all of his instances within the Equation unsolved, where he can watch everything, but change nothing.

Curiously, the shape of the skull is closest to an owls, the current significance of this is unknown, though Origin did once appear as a Garuda, but it's confirmed by several sources, most of which are demigods, that they and their creator (which could only mean Origin) don't have a physical form or any sort of gender, they choose to use guises that speak of their personality.

 

[Khayalan]

A screenshot of my first town i made ^^

Feedback is appreciated
-Khayalan

 

[LTN Games]

@Khayalan this actually looks really good for your first map. Not much I can say about it, it's really well done, not too big not too small, the empty space is filled in nicely and everything seems to look in place. I thought maybe you could put the water well directly where that old spooky tree is but really no big deal lol. Good work, looking forward to seeing what else you can come up with.

 

[Bizarre Monkey]

That's pretty good! You just need to break up the flowers some, right now it looks very unorganic. I think there's just too many. Especially in the lower left near the footpath.

It needs to be more...

Lackadaisy.

Just one more thing, the tile on the roof on the far left, it clashes a little, I think.Overlay it with either something more wooden or something more blue-tile like, that brilliant silver is a bit weird. But at this point I'm nitpicking.

Here's what I been working on.

Smells like typical JRPG endgame boss finale.

 

[Iron Croc]

@Bizarremonkey: Your grammar is lacking. Unnecessary comma in "And you will follow".
In "You will all die here, and to thank everyone for their bravery." That sentence is awkward. Also, unnecessary comma after "you will all de here". I'd suggest hiring an editor to proofread your dialogue and story text. :)


@Khayal Very good effort for your first ever map. In your red roofed house, you're using the roof tiles incorrectly. Try to find another roof tile if the proper roof tiles don't exist for what you're trying to go for. Keep it up! You'll get there! :)

 

[Bizarre Monkey]

@Bizarremonkey: Your grammar is lacking. Unnecessary comma in "And you will follow".

Hahaha, don't worry, that's on purpose.

In "You will all die here, and to thank everyone for their bravery." That sentence is awkward. Also, unnecessary comma after "you will all de here". I'd suggest hiring an editor to proofread your dialogue and story text. :)

Oh that will be a thing, don'tchu worry. Also I agree. That last part including bravery needs to be reworked, thanks!

From a surface level it seems I'm entirely horrible at writing, hahaha! Oh boss gimmicks, woe is you!

Do not fear Miss DLC, I will have this game so sparkly with charming dialect it'll curl your lashes all by themselves! ^.^

Niirgo types in very stinted phrases, to alienate and distance him from the mortal characters. He's like a small child in ways, thinking that using full stops every word makes you look cool.

See? I'm perfectly fine for sentence construction and grammar, I'm just so good, it's invisible! :D (Unless you're playing the game, by which point it'd be obvious.) Hehehe, anyway, enough about how I'm just too smooth, I've got more to show!

Just a couple more in hidey taggies!

Spoiler: Hidey Taggies!

Yes, I am adding party members mid battle! WHATCHU' GONNA DO?

@Khayal: Dunno what DLC is on about but those roofs, sans the thing I mentioned, look really nice, at least from where I'm sitting, if that's your first town map, I really look forward to your tenth, you're a natural!

You wanna see me first town? haha, ah man!
Hang on, I can't find that piece of shit. Damn it...

Oh well, I was using world tiles as buildings, ahaha. Oh past me!

 

[Iron Croc]

Title screen concept! :D Font used is free to use with commercial projects, soooo that's always good :D

http://i.imgur.com/7QIpQKk.jpg

 

[Zebestian]

@Iron Croc ... Eh... I'm not too fond of that font. I do like the trippy dragonfly though. :D

 

[PandaMaru]

@Iron Croc I'm sorry but I don't like it too. It doesn't fit together and don't send any message. Can you please describe what the game is about and what do you want to show with the title/logo for it? Then we can give you far more advise what you can change. :)

 

[Bizarre Monkey]

Mostly it's the white sheen from the innerbevel effect, use a different blend mode or change the opacity or color, and it'd probably look way better.

Also the outer-glow needs to be more subtle.

Hohoho! Well I have quite something guys!

Are you ready?

Be warned: If your volume is up high... you may wanna turn it down a tad.

Release will likely happen in December somewhere between christmas and before christmas.

 

[Iron Croc]

@Kaimen Thank you for your opinion. :) The font is easy for me to read, so that's why I chose it.
@PandaMaru The game is about a dragonfly. You float about in a trippy, dream-like, surreal environment for the majority of the game...

The theme is relaxing, calming, unwinding... and the game itself has ASMR sounds, soft, pleasing music, easy but effective gameplay. Hope that helps!

I welcome suggestions, but the dragonfly stays! So do the theme colors of purple, blue, orange, and yellow. They signify a sunrise/sunset one would see in a desert. (Also if you know of any other fonts that you think might work and why, I'm willing to change it if it's free for commercial use.)

The current title screen is a placeholder and will eventually be evented. :)

 

[JustSomeone123]

Me again, trying to create an out-doors effect but I'm just not feeling it, any advice?:

Something's off but I can't wrap my head around it, besides the overly large water-fall, Is it the trees, tiles or screen tint? Or even something else? I personally think it's the trees. XCXCXC

 

[Zebestian]

I think it's the trees. Especially those on the edges of the cliff. They look just a little bit off to me. No pun intended. :D
Other than that I think it's fine. It's a forest-y area so it should be crowded with plants and all. :)

 

[JustSomeone123]

Phew, glad someone else agrees, it's driving me crazy.;( I just can't find trees that will go with the tiles. If I move them forward a bit, maybe that will help. Regardless, thanks for replying!^u^

 

[Bizarre Monkey]

A bit of existential creep.

That's a pretty hidden part of the game, and can for all intents and purposes, be called an easter egg.

Here's a preview of Tristy's new face.