Music I want to collect your ideas

[Mr.Gaming]

Hello everyone,

I'm just want to change one of my songs for RPG Maker MV.co and I would like to know how you would imagine the song to Sound like. This is a Battle Theme I have the original Version placed into the sound cloud, so you know wat that one sounds like.

Any idea is welcome.

Listen to my original here.

 

[Phil]

Hello everyone,

I'm just want to change one of my songs for RPG Maker MV.co and I would like to know how you would imagine the song to Sound like. This is a Battle Theme I have the original Version placed into the sound cloud, so you know wat that one sounds like.

Any idea is welcome.

Listen to my original here.

I like this one, I don't think anything should change

 

[Mr.Gaming]

I like this one, I don't think anything should change

I do not want to compose the song Completely new , I want just mix it up for you all and would like to know what would you like in that context. From the Style, you know? That is all. Like an Special RPG Maker MV.co Edition.

 

[Phil]

I do not want to compose the song Completely new , I want just mix it up for you all and would like to know what would you like in that context. From the Style, you know? That is all. Like an Special RPG Maker MV.co Edition.

A change of instruments, piano,flute,clarinet, violin,viola,etc. would be good,
It is also good if it is a slower tempo music, just to let the music sip in softly.

 

[Dad3353]

@Mr.Gaming ...

A very worthy composition, well executed, well mixed, and entirely in keeping with the 'Battle' theme. One or two remarks, if you would (not criticism; there's nothing wrong with the piece 'as is'...)..?
For a piece of this length, I'd have chosen to alleviate the insistant repetition of the underlying theme with either a drop-out (or volume reduction...), only for it to return, or a change of key for a while, again, returning to the initial key before looping. I'd like to hear the looped section, too, unless it's supposed to loop from end to end, in which case I'd suggestion a smoother transition from the end, back to the start.
To end on a more positive note (although I insist, it's a fine piece; I have no reserves on that...), I particularly liked the slight asymmetry with the use of 6 bars, rather than the more common 8-bar motifs that we hear, which brings a more refreshing touch.
In short, an excellent piece. I'd be more than happy to include it in any of my Projects. Well done.

 

[curryisnice]

I really like that driving idea in the strings and overall it's very nice composition which I can easily imagine being used in a battle scenario.
One thing I noticed is that you take away the percussion for a while when you begin to add a melody line through various instruments.

I feel you could perhaps add even more of an epic/heroic tone if you brought the drums back in when you have
the male choir singing the melody - idk I just alway feel like drums strings and voice sounds awesome together
(just look at the skyrim theme for example) - I feel it would also maintain the spine of the piece as there constantly
needs to be that driving motion throughout a battle theme in order to keep the player interested.

This is all just my opinion of course but overall a great piece!! Nice one :)

 

[Mr.Gaming]

@Dad3353

It seems that you are in real life musician , I'm right with that? I go at least assume , after the way you 've analyzed my song. This has always made my violin teacher as well.

 

[Dad3353]

@Dad3353

It seems that you are in real life musician , I'm right with that? I go at least assume , after the way you 've analyzed my song. This has always made my violin teacher as well.

@Mr.Gaming ...

Well, if 'drummer' counts as musician, I suppose I am..! Basically, I'm rather more 'old', which gives me a longer telescope to look through at stuff..! Listen, then, to your violin teacher, who seems to be leading you up the right track.
Looking forward to hearing more of your works.