My Game's Plotline & Characters?

[Trumully]

Thanks. To be honest that was my first time typing a story to a character that wasn't my own so I wasn't sure you would like.
I love cookies. Feel free to ask for my help. i'm happy to give it.
[doublepost=1444447741,1444445792][/doublepost]Hey, Trumully would you be interested in testing out my first rpg maker game?
its called Reaper a changing world and you can download it on gamejolt. its just a demo
but i'm close to completing it and would love some feedback.

Yea sure I will. Hold on for like 45-60 mins. Got a barbecue to go to. See ya!

 

[Sonicboy95]

Yea sure I will. Hold on for like 45-60 mins. Got a barbecue to go to. See ya!

thanks.

 

[Trumully]

Hey, Trumully would you be interested in testing out my first rpg maker game?
its called Reaper a changing world and you can download it on gamejolt. its just a demo
but i'm close to completing it and would love some feedback.

Sure! I'll test it right now! :p Back by the way. Thought the barbecue would be longer :D
[doublepost=1444451038,1444449540][/doublepost]Okay, I tested it, but I need you to make a thread about your game so I can say. I just want to follow the rules as it is against the rules to go off topic on a thread. So once you make a thread, I'll give feedback. ;)

Edit: Oops, sorry for double posting. Merged.

 

[Sonicboy95]

Sure! I'll test it right now! :p Back by the way. Thought the barbecue would be longer :D
[doublepost=1444451038,1444449540][/doublepost]Okay, I tested it, but I need you to make a thread about your game so I can say. I just want to follow the rules as it is against the rules to go off topic on a thread. So once you make a thread, I'll give feedback. ;)

Edit: Oops, sorry for double posting. Merged.

thread is up under showroom

 

[DevoidOS]

Thanks. To be honest that was my first time typing a story to a character that wasn't my own so I wasn't sure you would like.
I love cookies. Feel free to ask for my help. i'm happy to give it.
[doublepost=1444447741,1444445792][/doublepost]Hey, Trumully would you be interested in testing out my first rpg maker game?
its called Reaper a changing world and you can download it on gamejolt. its just a demo
but i'm close to completing it and would love some feedback.

Even though I'm not Trumully, I'll check out your game.

 

[Sonicboy95]

Even though I'm not Trumully, I'll check out your game.

Feel free to, I can always use the feedback.

 

[DrgnElectric]

Is your story all gun based or are there guys running around with melee weapons too? I have a concept that you might be interested in character wise.

 

[Sonicboy95]

Is your story all gun based or are there guys running around with melee weapons too? I have a concept that you might be interested in character wise.

Nice Lelouch pic, I love it. Code geass was a great anime and he is one of the smartest characters I have seen in anime but that's why I like him so much.

 

[DrgnElectric]

Nice Lelouch pic, I love it. Code geass was a great anime and he is one of the smartest characters I have seen in anime but that's why I like him so much.

Why thank you! I love mecha anime and CG is on a level all its own

 

[DevoidOS]

Why thank you! I love mecha anime and CG is on a level all its own

JIBUN WO!! :) Yea Code Geass is pretty good.

 

[Trumully]

Now now, don't go too off topic. I must show my rule following manner.

Is your story all gun based or are there guys running around with melee weapons too? I have a concept that you might be interested in character wise.

No, it isn't. I'm going to have assassinations with knives and stuff. But my question is, I don't understand how I could make it exciting to do assassinations. But yes, I would definitely like to hear your concept! :P

 

[DevoidOS]

Make it so that you have to make sure that your target doesn't notice you before you assassinate them. Like their going somewhere and you have to stalk them. That would be cool.

 

[LTN Games]

Okay, I tested it, but I need you to make a thread about your game so I can say. I just want to follow the rules as it is against the rules to go off topic on a thread. So once you make a thread, I'll give feedback. ;)

Now now, don't go too off topic. I must show my rule following manner.

Self moderating community, how convenient.

I really like what you have going on here for the lore so far,I like how it was a good bot who just snaps, because this also opens up the opportunity to have decisions that effect your karma or whatever you wanna call it, allowing the player to choose to be better or a cold blooded character. You could also just stay pure evil from that point on and it could be a gory mess but that's all up to you :D @Sonicboy95 you are are something else, I loved what I read, I will be sure to contact you when I need some help. So yea I am excited for what you got going on here be an awsome game to see developed.

 

[DevoidOS]

You should include some stuff about the darkweb/shadow web in your game also. #2spooky4me

 

[Trumully]

Self moderating community, how convenient.

I really like what you have going on here for the lore so far,I like how it was a good bot who just snaps, because this also opens up the opportunity to have decisions that effect your karma or whatever you wanna call it, allowing the player to choose to be better or a cold blooded character. You could also just stay pure evil from that point on and it could be a gory mess but that's all up to you :D @Sonicboy95 you are are something else, I loved what I read, I will be sure to contact you when I need some help. So yea I am excited for what you got going on here be an awsome game to see developed.

Ha! I'm really good at moderation ;) Yea, I agree with my lore that I did. I'm just playing around with a karma system and I thought, hey, why not make it decide your side in the origins. I could make the lore I wrote the alternative and what they choose in the intro, it will change the lore and the karma of the character for the beginning of actual gameplay. I will make it so that the you change karma all the way along the game as well. Does that sound good?

 

[Sonicboy95]

Self moderating community, how convenient.

I really like what you have going on here for the lore so far,I like how it was a good bot who just snaps, because this also opens up the opportunity to have decisions that effect your karma or whatever you wanna call it, allowing the player to choose to be better or a cold blooded character. You could also just stay pure evil from that point on and it could be a gory mess but that's all up to you :D @Sonicboy95 you are are something else, I loved what I read, I will be sure to contact you when I need some help. So yea I am excited for what you got going on here be an awsome game to see developed.

Thanks! happy to help. Still can't wait to see the game.

 

[DrgnElectric]

Now now, don't go too off topic. I must show my rule following manner.

No, it isn't. I'm going to have assassinations with knives and stuff. But my question is, I don't understand how I could make it exciting to do assassinations. But yes, I would definitely like to hear your concept! :P

Ok, well how about having a character that uses a "bo staff" that's actually a carbine-type rifle. They start out with traditional melee specials up to a point, then !!BAM!! S/he gets a shot skill and proceeds to learn skills that are a mixture of melee/shot; blowing the minds of the other characters (and players alike)?

Main inspiration that comes to mind is Pascal's "Shotstaff" from Tales of Graces ( F) as i'm very much a Tales fan.

 

[Trumully]

Ok, well how about having a character that uses a "bo staff" that's actually a carbine-type rifle. They start out with traditional melee specials up to a point, then !!BAM!! S/he gets a shot skill and proceeds to learn skills that are a mixture of melee/shot; blowing the minds of the other characters (and players alike)?

Main inspiration that comes to mind is Pascal's "Shotstaff" from Tales of Graces ( F) as i'm very much a Tales fan.

I like this idea. I'll put the idea on the drawing board ;)

 

[DrgnElectric]

You are very welcome

 

[LTN Games]

I will make it so that the you change karma all the way along the game as well. Does that sound good?

Sounds great :)