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Zendir: A new World Remake

Chibae

Ashelia B'nargin Dalmasca
Zendir is a game that was made by Hotfirelegend/eternalshadow on the rpgmaker webs, and he gave permission so i can remake it :P I really love the story and characters in thegame, which is why i chose to remake it.

I already have the first dungeon and you can travel to the mainland its playable here : http://chibievil.net/games/ZendirRemake/ZendirRemake.html and I will update it every chance I get, even if u have a save file, the game will still have the updates :P This was also Made in rpg maker MV

If you want to compare, here is a link for the original : http://forums.rpgmakerweb.com/index.php?/topic/5134-zendir-a-new-world/

Time for some screen shots :P
Characters
Zaphilia -
Zaphilia has had to fend for herself since her parents abandoned her after an incident in her childhood. Since then, she's made friends with some of the locals, having to keep her magical ability hidden for the most part for fear of repercussions. However, her secret is let out and she quickly makes enemies, thus prompting the beginning of the game. Once her mind is made up, it cannot be changed. She is determined, curious and resourceful, a valuable asset to any party exploring the land of Zendir.

Zane -
Zane originally became friends with Zaphilia because both of their names began with Z. Now much less naive than he was when he met Zaphilia, Zane has become much more distant as time has gone on. Nonetheless, he remains friends with her due to all the knowledge that they share together, and he is the one to stick up for Zaphilia and believe it wasn't her fault when the crops start dying on the island.

Dalnaycus -
An over-excitable magician, Dalnaycus is a master of the arcane, the prized student of the Academy. He is witty and knows many of the Ancient Languages and doesn't hesitate in going anywhere with Zaphilia upon her induction to the academy. He however, looks disdainfully upon those who are not academy members, just as those who detest magicians, do.

Anya -
A young girl who Zaphilia befriended. She has an eccentric father and a (thankfully) normal mother, both of which appear to have contributed to her strange, mixed personality. She is a bag of all-sorts, holding many tricks up her sleeve as well as information that could prove helpful.

Dorian -
A clumsy, hapless boy who can't do a thing right. He originally wanted to be a squire for a Knight in Galapoca fortress, but they wouldn't take him in. Dreading the prospect of being sent back to his faraway home, he eventually finds another job working for the resident magician of Galapoca Fortress. It is one disaster after another though, and the first job he messes up leads to his introduction to the party...

screenshots


Extended intro






school of Magic



He cooking me food yay


He teaching me magics


First dungeon Hype

Story - Its the exactly the same as the original, but here it is copied and pasted -

Off the coast of Zendir lies a small island, slowly being eroded away by the sea. On this island, magic is performed in secret for it is frowned upon by the community of the island, who blame it on the failure of their crops. One person in particular - Zaphilia - was chased out of the village when they saw her perform a magical act, but her childhood friend gives her an avenue of escape - the idea to travel to Zendir, the mainland, where magic is permitted. However, the disaster that has struck the small island is also prevalent on the mainland, and so it falls to Zaphilia to use her abilities to restore the land to what it once was whilst at the same time, restoring faith in magic!



Throughout Zaphilia's adventures, she will quite literally make friends, enemies and allies for life. The choices she makes in either helping or shunning them will heavily impact on whether she can save Zendir or not. There are at least three different endings to unlock, depending on which avenue of the story is taken and what choices are made. This is Zendir, a new world!


In Zendir, there's a fantastic variety of foods, drinks, monsters and people who need help in their lives. By assisting these people and exploring the local culture, the story will expand upon itself to thrust you into a brand new world which bears little resemblance to our own... unless you look closely. Even then, it is worth exploring the world for what it is, and accepting the curiosities and oddities that come with it. Magic plays a part in this world, but due to an incident in the past which many residents do not like to talk about, it has been shunned. Therefore, the land has become archaic in its nature, and so this is where Zaphilia comes in, in terms of reintroducing the favours that magic brings. It is a monumental task not to be frowned at, and only the correct choices will lead you upon the right path. This is a game of decisions and choices. Take the plunge. Open the book, and begin reading the fantastic story...


Hope you enjoy this game, and please give me constructive critism that can help me improve my skills in the future. Any negative feedback I will Just ignore Thank you :)


Credits :
Enterbrain for the awesome graphics and face,sprite and battler generator
Hotfirelegend/eternalshadow for the awesome original game
Yanfly for the menu plugins, message plugin, and victory aftermath
Hime for the More choices
Jackuz - For the Github link :P
 
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cav_dan

Towns Guard
Hmmm... this first scene could be a bit more fleshed out. Maybe you should have Zane come from the right and watch from a distance before charging in?

Also, some capital letters are off. The phrase:
"But I know it wasn't you, It was the water"
the word "it" shouldn't be capitalized. I don't know if the original game has this, but maybe you should check it out? Or have someone review the text after?

Also also, there's this annoying space before each talk. You should look into that too.
 

Chibae

Ashelia B'nargin Dalmasca
i fixed it since then i also moved it to my own domain, will fix the link shortly :) I know i have problems with caps letters people have notified me about it, I just don't realize i am doing it.
 

Iron Croc

I eat my fries with fire.
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Good starting out! Id love to help you out in any way I can.... Just I don't have MV... YET.
But, Ive seen what you did in only a week. I can't imagine what kind of raw talent you could unleash on something like this. :D
Plus, my offer to be your composer still stands. :)
(I could also help with grammar and spelling! Except for the parts where your characters ahve obvious accents)
 
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