Should I add To This?/How Can This Be Improved?

[Arythorn]

Hi Guys, it's Arythorn,

I was just wondering if any of you would like to take a few moments of your time to listen to a very simple, repetitive piano melody I have written. I am considering adding in an accompanying melody/general accompaniment, in a higher octave, but would like feedback on whether, and perhaps how, to do so.

Also, feel free to review it if you wish.

Thanks In Advance.

 

[Companion Wulf]

Hi @Arythorn. I really like this. It's simple but effective. And my opinion is, yes, it needs something to break that repetitiveness; perhaps a deep dynamic string accompaniment or a viola/violin with a pizzicato interlude before returning to arco again.

I've recently started playing keyboard again after a very very long time not playing it. And not just the simple, "slowly ease back into playing" either; the complex difficult things to compose and play! LOL.

 

[Arythorn]

Thank You. Also, I agree with the string idea. It's what I was thinking about, I would just have to figure out how to do that and make it all flow together.