So I made a simple mythology that I will be using in my game. Here it is:
(English is not my first language, so sorry for the bad english :D )
"In the beginning, the Goddess Atra created the mortal world Sanctum, separated from the world of the Deities. She then gave birth to two children: Ennea her daughter, and Ceros her son. With her blood flowing in their veins, both are bestowed with the power to summon ancient beasts called Aetherean on their side. But this power is forbidden for all deities because they believe that this will cause a great catastrophe.
Atra assigned Ennea as the guardian and ruler of the Sanctum. Ceros felt a twinge of envy so he asked Atra to create another realm where he can be its ruler, but Atra refused. She believe that Ceros is not worthy enough for such task, and he has much to learn. Knowing that her mother never acknowledge his capability, he let his hatred consumed his soul.
For a long time Ceros carried his hatred towards his mother and his sister. Until one day, he killed his mother. Ceros knew that he will never become a ruler with Atra dead. Filled with hatred, he vowed to kill his sister and destroy the mortal world. Then the “Cataclysm" happened. He summoned Aethereans using his own blood and unleashed them on the surface of the world, but Ennea fought back. She summoned Aethereans even powerful than Ceros, and they fought in the mortal world. In the end, Ennea defeated Ceros. Ceros swore to take revenge and resurrect in time to unleash another calamity in the mortal world. But Ennea swore that when that time comes, she will return to the mortal world to protect it again. Before Ceros vanished, he threw a spike in Ennea’s chest, wounding her badly. The world is ruined. Using Ennea's remaining strength, she renewed the Sanctum, giving it a new life, and then she vanished.
The remnants of the Aethereans scattered around Sanctum and continue to exist up to the present time, they believe that Ennea allow these remnants to remain in the mortal world to guard it and to make it prosper. It is said that some seers possess powers to summon Aethereans from their remnants to bestow great power to a human.
According to the legend, both Ennea and Ceros vanished but there are some who believe that their remnants are somewhere in the Sanctum, hidden, and waiting to be resurrected. The seers know this, but never seek them to avoid the "Cataclysm" to happen again."
So what do you think? And please feel free to correct wrong grammars and reconstruct the sentences to make it better, I will greatly appreciate it :)
EDITED:
Changed the name of the deities and some terms.
BTW, I get the name 'Thymos' from the greek word of anger. Frey from the name Freya in Nordic mythology. Atra - i don't know how I came up with this name lol, I just know this is a Latin word and the feminine of 'Atro' which means dark?
(English is not my first language, so sorry for the bad english :D )
"In the beginning, the Goddess Atra created the mortal world Sanctum, separated from the world of the Deities. She then gave birth to two children: Ennea her daughter, and Ceros her son. With her blood flowing in their veins, both are bestowed with the power to summon ancient beasts called Aetherean on their side. But this power is forbidden for all deities because they believe that this will cause a great catastrophe.
Atra assigned Ennea as the guardian and ruler of the Sanctum. Ceros felt a twinge of envy so he asked Atra to create another realm where he can be its ruler, but Atra refused. She believe that Ceros is not worthy enough for such task, and he has much to learn. Knowing that her mother never acknowledge his capability, he let his hatred consumed his soul.
For a long time Ceros carried his hatred towards his mother and his sister. Until one day, he killed his mother. Ceros knew that he will never become a ruler with Atra dead. Filled with hatred, he vowed to kill his sister and destroy the mortal world. Then the “Cataclysm" happened. He summoned Aethereans using his own blood and unleashed them on the surface of the world, but Ennea fought back. She summoned Aethereans even powerful than Ceros, and they fought in the mortal world. In the end, Ennea defeated Ceros. Ceros swore to take revenge and resurrect in time to unleash another calamity in the mortal world. But Ennea swore that when that time comes, she will return to the mortal world to protect it again. Before Ceros vanished, he threw a spike in Ennea’s chest, wounding her badly. The world is ruined. Using Ennea's remaining strength, she renewed the Sanctum, giving it a new life, and then she vanished.
The remnants of the Aethereans scattered around Sanctum and continue to exist up to the present time, they believe that Ennea allow these remnants to remain in the mortal world to guard it and to make it prosper. It is said that some seers possess powers to summon Aethereans from their remnants to bestow great power to a human.
According to the legend, both Ennea and Ceros vanished but there are some who believe that their remnants are somewhere in the Sanctum, hidden, and waiting to be resurrected. The seers know this, but never seek them to avoid the "Cataclysm" to happen again."
So what do you think? And please feel free to correct wrong grammars and reconstruct the sentences to make it better, I will greatly appreciate it :)
EDITED:
Changed the name of the deities and some terms.
BTW, I get the name 'Thymos' from the greek word of anger. Frey from the name Freya in Nordic mythology. Atra - i don't know how I came up with this name lol, I just know this is a Latin word and the feminine of 'Atro' which means dark?
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