First Game, need feedback and critique

[EvieGames]

Hello, I have a lot of ideas and need help with what options to go with.
You can find the demo posted here.

Errors I'm aware of are:

• A few grammatical/spelling mistake
• Battle system needs to be more balanced
• BGM of a certain room doesn't turn off when you leave.

Things I'm considering:

• Longer intro
• Ability to teleport (for future releases, I don't want the player to walk around too long)
• Removing world map
• Releasing game in chapters instead of one full game. (I don't want the game size to get too big and I would stay more motivated if I had a few people waiting on the next chapter.)

 

[Lightcycler]

Personally, before I click on a link someone has posted in their thread, I'd like a bit more to go on (pictures, a demo video, or even the demo posted here). I would like to know more about your game, but from the information listed here, I'm not quite sure what your game is about.

 

[jdh34]

What you need is a team
Lets help each other out
Try playing chrono trigger for ideas

My game title is called east west southside story partly based on chrono trigger
one thing the guard outside needs to jump to initiate the conversation with the girl

otherwise it sounds as if both guards are talking at the same time