Good, however I feel there are too many notes, next time, try adding notes that are held, say, for half a bar or a full bar on the bass/base clef (bottom), and add the melody (the main sound) on the treble clef (Top), the held notes act as a base (Hence being on the base/bass clef - the bottom one) and accompaniment. You wouldn't have to change the whole piece, but just adding some base notes here and there can really change the feel and sound of a piece. (If both clefs play the same tune consistently, its hard to differentiate the two clefs and makes the piece almost eel incomplete at times.) Also making it so the Treble clef had held notes too, such as half bars or the odd full bar here and there, gives the music more texture. Also dynamics - the volume of the music plays a big influence, things like crescendo's - where the music goes from quiet to loud in a sort of progressive, gradient kind of way, and diminuendo, where the music goes from loud to quiet in the same manner. (Sorry for the Mini Theory Lecture!)
Hope this helps :)
and yes, I am really basic, using only notes, ;-; thankfully
the legendary Dad3353 say he is willing to guide me!
Thank you for the lecture! I really need them!!!